In the intro is playing together a big problem. It must be more piano and the big sound of a warm choral brass band. Variation 1: Why so heavy ??? ??? articulation. The total balance as held more attention for main themes. The end of this variation was superb. Variation 2: Starting too loud. The contrasts in the dynamics are too small. Gently some times lika a “siciliano”. In each bar crescendos and decrescendos ??. Var. 3: I cannot hear every technical line. Unbalance? Var. 4: Softer sound. Warm Molto Expressive, is too less present. The musical interline could be better. Var. V: Jolly the basses is now really too heavy. Var. 6: Immediately changing in the good atmosphere of the scene is sometimes too too late or not present in the total band. Theme without(too less) direction.A band with talent and musical feeilings.
Mye flott musisering. Varm tuttiklang, (f v/starten+17 og 18, fin stil.) Gode kontraster i (v/6, 27, 28, og dynamikk. (opp etter 20). God briljans og driv(Var 3+10→). Flott flygelhorn (intro.), sop. (v/8) samt grovmessing(25→28) s. basser(29+Var 6). Noe uryddig v/starten, 1, 13, 31+4/s, uklare 16.deler 2→+33→, samt foran 23→24→. Litt tung stil ofte(for eksempel Var 2(s.basser) 5, slutten av Var. 2, Var. 4, 30→+32→. Litt usikkert foran 5 og noe stivt i Var 4. Jevnt over godt gjennomført.